Monday, June 1, 2009

An Awakening


Venerate life in all its forms,
distinct and pristine as it was born,
through endeavours that wreaked havoc on its fragile skin,
making it deplete in the storms self formed.
Pristine it was and would have been,
if the tides of humanity had been soothing.
Though the impure tags along,
a few pores of truth, have a short sojourn.
I, a dilapidated soul, when asked for repentance,
it stretched its arms to take me in,
and then I realised what a fool I was,
never saw the path,
towards a New Beginning.

6 comments:

  1. love this piece..its so much ur blog title, u must put this on ur homepage!!

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  2. I absolutely love the way that you put words together...like a symphony...beautiful poem. I am so happy to have found your blog! Thank you so much for your comment..it was the most beautiful thing anyone's ever said to me! I treasure it!
    Love and Light, Angelynn

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  3. Thanks Rush great idea, will do that:)
    Thanks Angelyn, you deserved the comment,great that came:)

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  4. Great Rush, was a bit caught up with work!How have u been:)

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  5. Nice post, I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for coming by, I also remember that song, thanks for sharing.

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